From clause basics to Band 6 syntax analysis — every lesson with stimulus, question, sample, criteria and worksheet.
Intended learning: locate subject and verb reliably; explain why simple sentences create emphasis.
Teaching: Every sentence needs a subject (who/what) and a finite verb. Simple sentences are not "baby sentences" — masters deploy them for impact after complexity.
Jesus wept.— John 11:, the shortest verse in the King James Bible — maximum grief per syllable.
Starters: "The abruptness of…" · "Placed after longer sentences, the simple clause…"
"He died." Two words, placed after pages of elaborate hope, function as narrative guillotine: the syntax permits no appeal, enacting for readers the finality the characters cannot escape.
Find five simple sentences in your reading; note where each appears in its paragraph and what effect placement creates.
Intended learning: join independents correctly and analyse coordination's equalising or accumulating force.
Teaching: Coordinators (FANBOYS) and semicolons join equals. Coordination says "these ideas weigh the same" — or, repeated ("and…and"), becomes polysyndeton.
Rewrite three comma-spliced pairs as compound sentences using different FANBOYS and once a semicolon.
Intended learning: use subordinators to rank ideas; analyse how texts background information.
Teaching: Subordinators (although, because, while, since, whereas) mark dependent clauses. What is subordinate is rhetorically demoted. Compare: "Although he lied, she stayed." vs "She stayed although he lied."
Fronting the concession makes forgiveness the headline; burying it makes betrayal the frame. Same words — opposite ethics. Skilled composers exploit exactly this lever.
Write six complex sentences; circle dependent clauses; arrow which idea dominates and why.
Intended learning: build compound-complex sentences deliberately; map clause structure visually.
Teaching: Bracket each clause [I] independent, [D] dependent. Compound-complex mirrors interiority — ideal when analysing stream-of-consciousness passages (Woolf, Joyce).
Compose one compound-complex sentence about your week; bracket clauses; then compress it into a simple sentence and compare effects.
Intended learning: distinguish accidental fragments from rhetorical ones; deploy fragments purposefully.
Teaching: Fragments isolate. Advertising lives on them ("Because you're worth it", L'Oréal). In creative writing they mimic thought. In essays, avoid unintentional ones.
Write a 100-word dramatic moment that ends in a fragment. Justify the fragment in one sentence.
Intended learning: analyse word-order manipulation for drama, formality and suspense.
Teaching: Fronted elements set frames; inversion adds gravity ("Blessed are the meek"); periodic sentences withhold the main clause until the end.
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times…— Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities (1859)
Invert five ordinary sentences ("I have never seen such rain" → "Never have I seen such rain"); note register change.
Intended learning: identify and analyse repetition structures in canonical speeches.
Teaching: Anaphora builds rhythm memory; tricolon delivers climactic closure. Combine with modality analysis from the Grammar pack.
Write a 6-line speech on a school issue using anaphora twice and one tricolon.
Intended learning: explain pace control through conjunction density.
Teaching: Asyndeton = breathless speed ("I came, I saw, I conquered"); polysyndeton = rolling absorption. Track conjunction density across a passage.
Rewrite one paragraph twice: all conjunctions removed, then doubled. Reflect in 50 words.
Intended learning: repair splices, run-ons and faulty parallelism instantly under exam conditions.
Teaching: Splice fixes: full stop / semicolon / FANBOYS+comma / subordinate one clause. Parallelism rule: items in a list must share grammatical form.
Hunt your last essay for splices and parallels; correct them; list patterns in your errors.
Intended learning: write a timed syntax-analysis paragraph from an unseen text.
Teaching: Routine: read twice → mark sentence boundaries → find longest + shortest sentence → ask what the contrast does → write F-E-L paragraphs.
The unseen passage's single long sentence — forty words before its first main verb — suspends resolution exactly as its protagonist suspends decision; when the verb finally arrives, it arrives as anticlimax. The syntax has already told us the character will fail to act.
Complete one timed (15 min) syntax paragraph weekly until trials; self-mark against Lesson 9's criteria.
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